Giải đề Writing Task 2 ngày 08/05/2021

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Áp dụng dàn bài chung trên chúng ta có dàn bài cụ thể cho đề bài này như sau 

Agree (Body 1+2): 

Body 1
Reason: More comfortable to lead a healthy lifestyle than to be under treatment
Example: Good food pushes mental and physical health

Body 2
Reason: Dynamic eating and exercise options to follow that is more economic than medical treatments
Explain: Being healthy keeps one from being in hospital. which cost more

2. Bài mẫu và từ vựng

2.1 Bài mẫu

Recently, there is an argument claiming that taxpayers’ money should be spent on promoting a healthy lifestyle rather than curing particular diseases. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and this essay will discuss several compelling reasons to support the position. 

To begin with, leading a heart-healthy lifestyle is a more enjoyable experience in comparison to staying under medical treatment. There are a variety of cooking recipes available for people to prepare the fresh ingredients that contain the nutrients needed for body’s growth. Hence, it has been proven that different cooking methods and presentations will stimulate the appetite, mood and body of the diners more. On the other hand, medicines are harder to take as some might have unpleasant flavors, cause indigestion, or damaging side effects to patients such as physical pains (sore skin, headache) and appearance (loss of hair, skin reactions), which can also impact mental well-beings. Thus, rather than allocating a huge sum of budget on medical treatments, it is a wiser gamble to allocate more investments on finding balanced diets that provide abundant nourishment.

Some might opine that staying fit and healthy is lavish, especially for the underprivileged. They argue that hitting the gym and purchasing optimal diets daily are out of the financial capacity of the majority of the citizens. Despite this, the essay believes that this thought is invalid. There are in fact a multitude of home exercises and nutrients that can be found in a variety of organic ingredients so buyers can opt for the choices that are suitable for one’s specific need and budget. Furthermore, following a healthy way of living helps improve the immune system to decrease the chances of facing deadly diseases. In the long term, the price avoided from certain medical treatments and medicines can amount to a much larger fortune than trying to eat healthy. Consequently, the thinking that curing saves more than pursuing a healthy lifestyle is inaccurate. 

In conclusion, this essay reiterates the statement that instead of tackling the disease when it has occurred, prevention by living healthily is a better way of using public budget. 

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2.2 Từ vựng

VOCABULARY
Heart-healthy (adj): conducive to a healthy heart and circulatory system (lành mạnh) 
Leading a heart-healthy lifestyle is an enjoyable experience.
Stimulate the appetite: kích thích sự thèm ăn 
Different cooking methods and presentations will stimulate the appetite of the diners.
Abundant (adj): more than enough (dồi dào)
Nourishment (n): food that you need to grow and stay healthy (chất dinh dưỡng) 
It is a wiser gamble to invest on a balanced diet that provide abundant nourishment.
Lavish (adj): spending, giving, or using more than is necessary or reasonable (hao phí)
The team has the most lavish training facility in the league.
The underprivileged (n): without the money, possessions, education, opportunities, etc. that the average person has (người nghèo) 
The charity raises money for holidays for the underprivileged.